Yiruma - Kiss The Rain

[PhoDacBiet]

I posted this up before 3GN crashed but don't know if anyone saw. This is a piano song but me and my friend came up with lyrics for it. I don't know what to say about it. I haven't recorded me or her singing it but comments if you want. The lyrics goes with the main notes and not the background. Only time background comes in is the chorus, the echoes.
( - ) are like...uhh, extended sounds? Hahha. Like thiiiiis.


Kiss The Rain - Lyrics By: Anni & Myself

Verse 1
Girl, when I glimpse the rain,
I tend to see your face.
Stare deep into your eyes.
And think of your smile.
You've got me mesmerized.
So in love with you.
And then I realize,
That you're here with me.

Verse 2
Oh, since the day we met.
Started our lives as friends.
I stood there by your side.
And you did the same.
I know that you're the one.
You will always be,
And forever- in my heart.

Chorus
I kiss the rain, (I kiss the rain)
To feel your lips, (To feel your lips)
To feel your heart,
Your soul,
Your everything,
I'm willing.
I hear your voice. (I hear your voice)
Inside my heart,
And I know that you are there,
And will never leave- me.

Verse 3
That day I saw your face.
For the fi--rst time.
It was the day that I,
Was no longer scared.
I know that you're the one.
You will always be.
My one- and only love.

Verse 4
This love will always be,
For everyone to see,
That you were meant for me,
Ab-so-lutely!
I always dreamed of this,
Magical feeling.
Fate tells me that,
Your my soul mate.

--Chorus--

Verse 5
You're here in front of me.
Here standing next to me.
Looking so love--ly.
I just can't resist.
I take your hand in mine.
Get down on just one knee.
And then I ask you,
Will you be mine?

Verse 6
Girl, when I glimpse the rain,
I tend to see your face.
Stare deep into your eyes.
And think of your smile.
You've got me mesmerized.
So in love with you.
And I know that,
Your here with me.

And forever, here with me.
--End--

[Huy]

good job.

[PATRICK]

Not bad.

[aznkat]

not bad, i really wanna see how this will be like recorded and stuff

[PhoDacBiet]

Haha uhh yea the lines if you notice are somewhat cheesy? xD We planned to record but no one had the essentials. The only thing I can do is play the actual piano song and sing at the same time, or someone sing for me.

[ricky]

"how..how did you know? i love this song!"

haha nice song. i wanna hear how it is recorded too.

[PhoDacBiet]

Ricky sing for me while I play the piano. <3

[heronestory]

hehe wow this is really good. haha good writing =).

hehe it makes me think now. i gotta think of a melody before writing a song so it would balance out.

hehe wanna hear it recorded. =)

[PhoDacBiet]

So after a very long time, I ran into the user above back in Aug '08 and she threw out a demo. Of course it's a demo so it's not the greatest perfection of the song but since some wanted to hear it (even though the thread was from hella days ago).

http://www.box.net/shared/dbqlde7i1o

Enjoy. =)

[Photik]

omg, jen!! lolol i talk to her on aim

[PhoDacBiet]

omg, jen!! lolol i talk to her on aim

Off Topic:

LOL you're one of her favorite DJs ;D

[PhoDacBiet]

</3 for the double post.

We'll probably finish the song sometime, I'm trying to input my part of the song so it's a duet but my voice sucks hahaha, til then I'll post an update.

[BryantP]

she sounds like shes forcing it out, especially when she emphasizes on the higher notes. i'm not a fantastic singer myself but i know its a demo. singing and playing an instrument is a hard thing to do -__-. she sounds a bit rough around 1:17 to the end.

find someone to record it semi-pro!

[RICKY]

semi-pro!

*ricky

LOL JK

i'll give it a listen when i get home from class.

[BryantP]

*ricky

LOL JK

i'll give it a listen when i get home from class.

yes ricky has a voice of the gods, i immediately ejaculate every time i hear this songbird of mine